Open Question: Could you please correct this short script in Mandarin Chinese for me? Thank you?

7 February 2012, 8:12 am

I just started to study Chinese and tomorrow I have an oral presentation. The language is very basic therefore I would ask you not too make it harder, when changing mistakes. I know that there will be some grammar mistakes; regarding this as well please don't complicate it too much. I would really appreciate that. Thank you very much! 1.上年 我去旅行去了。 2.我 参观了澳大利亚，新西兰，新加坡 和 泰国。 3.上年五月我在曼谷。 4.曼谷很大。 5.曼谷有最大的商场。or 在世界上,曼谷的商场最大。 6.它的名字是乍都节。 7.有千的衬衫，鞋子，书和一个人像要买的一切。 8.餐，水果很好吃。 9.乍都节非常大。 10.它有一万五千店。 11.它很有名，外国人去那里很常常。 12.我走了很多各小时。 13.天气非常热为曼谷总是很热。 14.这个商场很便宜。 15.这个商场比伦敦的便宜得多！ 16.在曼谷买东西很有意思。 17.我看了衬衫和商人青了：多少钱？ 18.我没知到我会了商。 19.后他告诉我：“一英镑”我回了说：太贵了！ 20.商人 是泰国人和他们说英语。 21.我很高兴为我愿意买很多东西可是那个商场太大了。 22.我不知到该买什么。 23.我在那里呆三小时和我不买没有东西。 24.没关系，我很喜欢这个商场和我想回去！ This is what I would like to say: 1.Last year I went travelling. 2.I visited Australia, New Zealand, Singapore and Thailand. 3.Last May I was in Bangkok. 4.Bangkok is very big . 5.Bangkok has the biggest market in the world. 6.Its name is Chatuchak. 7.There are thousands of shirts, shoes, books and everything a person want to buy. 8.The food and the fruit are very tasty. 9.Chatuchak is very big. 10.It has 15,000 stores. 11.It is very famous, many foreigners go there very often. 12.I stayed there a lot of hours. 13.Weather is very hot because in Bangkok is always hot. 14.This market is very cheap. 15.This market is much cheaper than in London! 16.In Bangkok buying things is very interesting. 17.I saw a shirt and the merchant asked: How much is it? 18.I didn’t know I could argue the price. 19.After he told me :”one pound” I said back: too expensive! 20.The merchants were thai people and they all spoke English. 21.I was happy because I wanted to buy many things, but that market was too big. 22.I didn’t not know what to buy. 23.I stayed there for three hours and I didn’t buy anything. 24.22 It does not matter, I liked that market very much and I will go back!... Read More »

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